Shadda Naralla’s arguments: Housing in Orange county

  • Naralla’s introduction paragraph is just as long if not longer than every other body paragraph on the rest of the page.
  • She quotes and paraphrases on almost every paragraph on the page.
  • The reason why she paraphrases on some and quoting on other parts of the essay is most likely to do with how she wants her essay to flow and come off to the audience.
  • Most of here data is numerical and she needs it for credibility but having just numbers and quotes makes the essay seems just like a compilation of evidence.
  • She present several statistics and quotations from other sources, about housing and economic situations of the working poor in Orange County.
  • Its hard to tell what the thesis sentence is on the first page but it is clearly about the struggling situation of the working poor in Orange County.


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